Our World

Compcat · 07-21-2004, 05:13 AM

This is a movie I sent into dragon films a couple months ago that I never really said anything about or told the public it is there, I'm a noob i'll admit and this is my first released movie so make all the mean comments you want, it won't get to me, so, ya

This movie is about me and my friends live but its a uhhh a "little" exaggerated (is that spelled right?) but I think I did a fairly good job, I didn't have a microphone at the time and some jokes you may not get but oh well.

http://compcat0.tripod.com/sitebuild...s/ourworld.zip

As I said you can say whatever you want about it, you can insult me or the movie, driving me away from joining the community, and thus making this community even smaller.

Compcat · 07-21-2004, 05:16 AM

crap link is acting weird, just download from website, that seems to be working

http://compcat0.tripod.com/

((the bob movies suck BAD, so I highly advise you don't download them!!))

Aaron Haynes · 07-21-2004, 05:17 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Compcat
As I said you can say whatever you want about it, you can insult me or the movie, driving me away from joining the community, and thus making this community even smaller.

Probably not a good idea to jump to this conclusion right off the bat. I've found the general pattern to be that if you assume people are going to be negative, it increases the negativity. I'll check this out soon and give you some feedback though.

(Oh, and welcome, fellow DF alumni

)

Denny Betterman · 07-21-2004, 10:13 AM

* some kind of Springer chant *
Dragon Films! Dragon Films!

Top link: Corrupted? Bottom link: tried to reach file, froze window, shut down IE. Bummer!

GOT IT Top link wouldn't work if I wasn't accessing the page, but the bottom link would freeze when I try to click its link. Solution? Open the bottom link, and then click the top link from this page, not from there. Fooled it!

...Now it says there weren't any files to extract. Shoot. That may be a compression problem? Hm.

Mr Mong · 07-21-2004, 12:17 PM

i spent like 3 years browsing dragonfilms before realising there was a community

Artful Ant · 07-21-2004, 04:31 PM

Haha! I did that shit too.

Compcat · 07-21-2004, 05:30 PM

Is that denny guy the only one having problems getting the file?
The bottom one is a website link, if you click on it, then it should bring you to the site.

Tuffe John · 07-21-2004, 06:09 PM

Links works for me, movie was alright could use some speeding uping and voices...

Artful Ant · 07-21-2004, 06:15 PM

I didn't like the way almost everything was made out of cubes.

Beast · 07-21-2004, 06:16 PM

REVIEW. Contains Spoilers

So dude, I actually watched this thing. Honestly it seemes like you may want to learn a few things from VGN2 if you liked it so much... The runtime on this movie is actually fairly long. 10-15 mins at least i seems like... or maybe thats just the slowness of the movie. About half of the movie is constructed in default scenes, the only music used is MIDI, which sounds awful. There's no speech whatsoever and hardly any sound effects used whatsover.

No onto what was bad about this movie. First off, if you've seen JDR Revival or VGN2 a lot of this will look quite familar. Not in terms of anmiation, Hell no. but in terms of randomness and ideas used, yes. Its about like that. The Animation is really really piss poor, I think if you compared this to the first animation you ever made, or the first 3dmm animation you'd ever seen, (Action Joe 1 maybe) Its about like that... Nahh, I take that back, probably not quite as good as AJ1. Anyways, so we got this Kid drew just chillin at his house right? and his friends all come over each with their own unique persona, Tony being some annoying pain in the ass whom you would NEVER invite over, and a few others. One was a D&D fan and the others were all no name turds....

Alright, There actually were a few scenes I actually like... one. Where the guy was like "What are we waiting for?? and throws the "bomb" at the wall that was like 2 feet away from him. Also, the effects on the last scene, used on the Crosses was pretty sick looking. nice job there. So here's what it all comes down to. You need to work on your animation. Make everyone walk at the same time, don't be afraid to move them faster then the walk. Don't have things appear and dissapear out of nowhere. Seriously, that guitar there at the end was God-Awful, make it look the way you want in the first frame. That jumping around shit looks Horrible. Next, use something other then Midi, even a piss poor low quality WAV file would sound better then what you had. And lastly, well not lastly, but this is all I'll cover. use voices man. I admit, the HMC on the island that "talked" but had no words come out looked nice, just imagine if he was actually talking. It would have looked that much better. I would also really help your motonous music that just drags throughout the movie, with hardly any sound other then that. That stated... some sound effects would be nice too. Oh yeah. there is one more thing.. use a different scnes transistion other then fading. You get so sick of watching that by the end.

So all in all. If you want to see JDR and VGN directed by Jeff Ching, this might just be your bag, Baby.

45%

Compcat · 07-21-2004, 06:17 PM

Well whenever I start on a really awesome movie i never get very far because it gets boring and I get a new idea. So my next will be better and probably have voices ( if i make another )

Bown · 07-21-2004, 06:17 PM

Haha, it was great for all the wrong reasons.

10/10.

Compcat · 07-21-2004, 06:21 PM

I only watched JDR revolutions recently so i wasnt inspired by that movie but i thought the vgns were some of the best 3dmm movies ever, so ya, i might've been inspired a bit by that

Compcat · 07-21-2004, 06:23 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Tom Bown
Haha, it was great for all the wrong reasons.

10/10.

What reasons?

Bown · 07-21-2004, 06:28 PM

Well, the animation sucked, scenery was average, but I'll be damned if I didn't laugh my ass off. Sometimes it was funny, sometimes it's because the humour was bad.

Artful Ant · 07-21-2004, 06:48 PM

And you would rate this 10/10 for that?

The Chinese Jew · 07-21-2004, 08:01 PM

"Our World" has been added to the box office. So if u liked it, vote for it you wanker!

http://www.geocities.com/cool3dmmstuff/boxoffice.html

and compcat, feel free to edit your comment to mention this.

Dominator Dan · 07-21-2004, 08:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Compcat
I only watched JDR revolutions recently so i wasnt inspired by that movie

oh and

Quote:

So all in all. If you want to see JDR and VGN directed by Jeff Ching, this might just be your bag, Baby.

Hah! Ah man that's funny

this stuff is ok, just, work on it a bit more, download some more movies, learn effects and shit, ( download JDR Revival plz

)

Compcat · 07-22-2004, 01:03 AM

Well this is not my greatest work, I didn't know too many effects when I made it, and I sort of made it for my friends since I had to move

I'll try to download JDR Revival but it will take forever on a 56k modem

Fish Taco · 07-22-2004, 03:00 AM

Compcat is a cool dude. I like him.

Hey Mikey Pictures · 07-22-2004, 03:05 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Compcat
i thought the vgns were some of the best 3dmm movies ever, so ya, i might've been inspired a bit by that

I was just so touched by that comment I HAD TO WATCH IT! Obviously there's a lot of room for improvement, but it was actually pretty funny. One of the jokes I really liked is how when they're sentenced to death, one of the charges is "bothering headhunters". Hahaha, I dunno, it just sounds funny. Oh yeah, and I have to thank you, this movie opened my eyes to how many innocent children could be hurt due to us not putting a "Don't attempt anything like this at home" warning at the end of VGN2. Poor bastards...

The Chinese Jew · 07-22-2004, 03:41 AM

Hahaha, the movie was actually not bad. I'm actually gonna go ahead and vote for this movie at the box office.

Yes the animations were bad. This guy's new, probably hasn't seen very many movies, I'll cut him a bit of slack.

But....it was actually pretty god damn funny! I'll call this the "Cabin Fever of 3dmm movies" as in....the awesomeness of this movie stems from how absolutely dumb and irrational it is. It's hilarious how stupid the movie is! (I'm not really critisizing your movie with that comment, cuz I happen to love "Cabin Fever")

The guy's running into the TV was hilarious!! And it was really funny how the guy was bleeding to death and his friend is like, "This guy has like 20 blood circles in the other room"

that's a good self referencing joke!

The movie was just funny in really dumb ways. Like why the fuck did they burn down the hospital for no reason? And they're like, "oh, so no health-care for you"

The part that made me laugh the hardest though was, "Check this out, we stole a bomb. Now let's throw the bomb at the school"

"Oh ok. But let me take a piss first" * Runs into the school to take a piss *

The idiotic way of detonating the bomb was also quite amusing. And how they threw the bomb like 2 feet and it blew up.

That was hilarious!! Or how the guy would shoot someone on a plane for no reason and no one on the plane reacted to it at all.

I have to say, the three people dying via Crusixtion actually took me by surprise. That was funny ending, and nice tribute to "LIfe of Brian"

Animations are bad, midis are bad, but I gotta admit...I laughed a lot at this movie! In general, I...I sorta liked this movie!

If I had still had "Ching and Mosher" going, I'd give this a marginal thumbs up.

Phil Williamson · 07-22-2004, 03:47 AM

Haha, I liked that. Good first effort.

Compcat · 07-22-2004, 04:13 AM

Wow I was expecting a lot of n bombs (noob, newb) to go flying

Aaron Haynes · 08-20-2004, 04:14 PM

http://www.lockntoad.com/reviews/aaronourworld.htm

Funny, but not always in the way I think it was intended to be. Good early effort, defintely keep at it.

07-21-2004, 05:13 AM	#1
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Our World This is a movie I sent into dragon films a couple months ago that I never really said anything about or told the public it is there, I'm a noob i'll admit and this is my first released movie so make all the mean comments you want, it won't get to me, so, ya This movie is about me and my friends live but its a uhhh a "little" exaggerated (is that spelled right?) but I think I did a fairly good job, I didn't have a microphone at the time and some jokes you may not get but oh well. http://compcat0.tripod.com/sitebuild...s/ourworld.zip As I said you can say whatever you want about it, you can insult me or the movie, driving me away from joining the community, and thus making this community even smaller.
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

07-21-2004, 05:16 AM	#2
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	crap crap link is acting weird, just download from website, that seems to be working http://compcat0.tripod.com/ ((the bob movies suck BAD, so I highly advise you don't download them!!))
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

07-21-2004, 12:17 PM	#5
Mr Mong Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 4,293	i spent like 3 years browsing dragonfilms before realising there was a community
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07-21-2004, 04:31 PM	#6
Artful Ant Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 656	Haha! I did that shit too.
Artful Ant Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 656

07-21-2004, 05:30 PM	#7
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Is that denny guy the only one having problems getting the file? The bottom one is a website link, if you click on it, then it should bring you to the site.
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

07-21-2004, 10:13 AM	#4
Denny Betterman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,531	* some kind of Springer chant * Dragon Films! Dragon Films! Top link: Corrupted? Bottom link: tried to reach file, froze window, shut down IE. Bummer! GOT IT Top link wouldn't work if I wasn't accessing the page, but the bottom link would freeze when I try to click its link. Solution? Open the bottom link, and then click the top link from this page, not from there. Fooled it! ...Now it says there weren't any files to extract. Shoot. That may be a compression problem? Hm.

07-21-2004, 06:09 PM	#8
Tuffe John Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 2,825	Links works for me, movie was alright could use some speeding uping and voices...

07-21-2004, 06:15 PM	#9
Artful Ant Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 656	I didn't like the way almost everything was made out of cubes.
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07-21-2004, 06:16 PM	#10
Beast Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 7,998	REVIEW. Contains Spoilers So dude, I actually watched this thing. Honestly it seemes like you may want to learn a few things from VGN2 if you liked it so much... The runtime on this movie is actually fairly long. 10-15 mins at least i seems like... or maybe thats just the slowness of the movie. About half of the movie is constructed in default scenes, the only music used is MIDI, which sounds awful. There's no speech whatsoever and hardly any sound effects used whatsover. No onto what was bad about this movie. First off, if you've seen JDR Revival or VGN2 a lot of this will look quite familar. Not in terms of anmiation, Hell no. but in terms of randomness and ideas used, yes. Its about like that. The Animation is really really piss poor, I think if you compared this to the first animation you ever made, or the first 3dmm animation you'd ever seen, (Action Joe 1 maybe) Its about like that... Nahh, I take that back, probably not quite as good as AJ1. Anyways, so we got this Kid drew just chillin at his house right? and his friends all come over each with their own unique persona, Tony being some annoying pain in the ass whom you would NEVER invite over, and a few others. One was a D&D fan and the others were all no name turds.... Alright, There actually were a few scenes I actually like... one. Where the guy was like "What are we waiting for?? and throws the "bomb" at the wall that was like 2 feet away from him. Also, the effects on the last scene, used on the Crosses was pretty sick looking. nice job there. So here's what it all comes down to. You need to work on your animation. Make everyone walk at the same time, don't be afraid to move them faster then the walk. Don't have things appear and dissapear out of nowhere. Seriously, that guitar there at the end was God-Awful, make it look the way you want in the first frame. That jumping around shit looks Horrible. Next, use something other then Midi, even a piss poor low quality WAV file would sound better then what you had. And lastly, well not lastly, but this is all I'll cover. use voices man. I admit, the HMC on the island that "talked" but had no words come out looked nice, just imagine if he was actually talking. It would have looked that much better. I would also really help your motonous music that just drags throughout the movie, with hardly any sound other then that. That stated... some sound effects would be nice too. Oh yeah. there is one more thing.. use a different scnes transistion other then fading. You get so sick of watching that by the end. *So all in all. If you want to see JDR and VGN directed by Jeff Ching, this might just be your bag, Baby.* 45%
Beast Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 7,998

07-21-2004, 06:17 PM	#11
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Well whenever I start on a really awesome movie i never get very far because it gets boring and I get a new idea. So my next will be better and probably have voices ( if i make another )
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

07-21-2004, 06:17 PM	#12
Bown Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 18,741	Haha, it was great for all the wrong reasons. 10/10.
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07-21-2004, 06:21 PM	#13
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	I only watched JDR revolutions recently so i wasnt inspired by that movie but i thought the vgns were some of the best 3dmm movies ever, so ya, i might've been inspired a bit by that
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

07-21-2004, 06:28 PM	#15
Bown Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 18,741	Well, the animation sucked, scenery was average, but I'll be damned if I didn't laugh my ass off. Sometimes it was funny, sometimes it's because the humour was bad.
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07-21-2004, 06:48 PM	#16
Artful Ant Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 656	And you would rate this 10/10 for that?
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07-21-2004, 08:01 PM	#17
The Chinese Jew Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 14,225	"Our World" has been added to the box office. So if u liked it, vote for it you wanker! http://www.geocities.com/cool3dmmstuff/boxoffice.html and compcat, feel free to edit your comment to mention this.

07-22-2004, 01:03 AM	#19
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Well this is not my greatest work, I didn't know too many effects when I made it, and I sort of made it for my friends since I had to move I'll try to download JDR Revival but it will take forever on a 56k modem
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

07-22-2004, 03:00 AM	#20
Fish Taco Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 7,034	Compcat is a cool dude. I like him.
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07-22-2004, 03:41 AM	#22
The Chinese Jew Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 14,225	Hahaha, the movie was actually not bad. I'm actually gonna go ahead and vote for this movie at the box office. Yes the animations were bad. This guy's new, probably hasn't seen very many movies, I'll cut him a bit of slack. But....it was actually pretty god damn funny! I'll call this the "Cabin Fever of 3dmm movies" as in....the awesomeness of this movie stems from how absolutely dumb and irrational it is. It's hilarious how stupid the movie is! (I'm not really critisizing your movie with that comment, cuz I happen to love "Cabin Fever") The guy's running into the TV was hilarious!! And it was really funny how the guy was bleeding to death and his friend is like, "This guy has like 20 blood circles in the other room" that's a good self referencing joke! The movie was just funny in really dumb ways. Like why the fuck did they burn down the hospital for no reason? And they're like, "oh, so no health-care for you" The part that made me laugh the hardest though was, "Check this out, we stole a bomb. Now let's throw the bomb at the school" "Oh ok. But let me take a piss first" * Runs into the school to take a piss * The idiotic way of detonating the bomb was also quite amusing. And how they threw the bomb like 2 feet and it blew up. That was hilarious!! Or how the guy would shoot someone on a plane for no reason and no one on the plane reacted to it at all. I have to say, the three people dying via Crusixtion actually took me by surprise. That was funny ending, and nice tribute to "LIfe of Brian" Animations are bad, midis are bad, but I gotta admit...I laughed a lot at this movie! In general, I...I sorta liked this movie! If I had still had "Ching and Mosher" going, I'd give this a marginal thumbs up.

07-22-2004, 03:47 AM	#23
Phil Williamson Super Moderator Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 16,900	Haha, I liked that. Good first effort.

07-22-2004, 04:13 AM	#24
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Wow I was expecting a lot of n bombs (noob, newb) to go flying
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

08-20-2004, 04:14 PM	#25
Aaron Haynes Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 15,125	http://www.lockntoad.com/reviews/aaronourworld.htm Funny, but not always in the way I think it was intended to be. Good early effort, defintely keep at it.